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Needle and Thread
Contributed by
Exodus
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Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 03:37:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Grab the needle, grab the thread
Wake up, darling, now you're dead
You chose to answer a question that had none
Who's the girl holding her cancer underneath the setting sun
You swept like death into me and now I can't understand your words
Wisked away into an empty dream, dull reality and lots of pretty birds
Your thoughts together-
Seamless as I sit utterly dreamless
I wonder often where my feeling went and why I appear to be dead--grab a needle, grab a thread
Sew me up with passive tendencies, stuff them into my long lost head
You bend to make. And just begin to break--
Thoughts I cannot take. As my world begins to twist and shake--
Thoughts of things I cannot take.
Happy.
Sad.
I'm alive.
I'm glad.
Grab a handle. Where's the broom?
Who has the key and who's locked inside the room?
Wrestle with a feeling
Hopeful and dreaded
I feel sick like disaster
But the needle is still threaded.
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Exodus
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Re: Needle and Thread
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by chaos78 on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 03:43:25 PM AEST
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I like this line , Thoughts I cannot take. As my world begins to twist and shake.. Good poem!
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Re: Needle and Thread
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by EddieDean on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 04:12:10 PM AEST
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Good work, keep it coming.
-Eddie Dean |
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Re: Needle and Thread
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by wizard on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 04:53:04 PM AEST
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nice write!!!
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Re: Needle and Thread
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 09:55:36 PM AEST
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| Brilliant. :) |
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Re: Needle and Thread
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by dark_fighter_chick on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 12:23:10 AM AEST
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DOOD!!!!!
"seamless as i sit utterly dreamless"
This was a sic poem, its like hella cool. |
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