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NECROPHILIA
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 06:07:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It seems like just yesturday
his skin was warm and tanned
Now its so cold and pale
His sparkling eyes have grown a dull lifeless grey
And yet, even in death
he smiles at me
We never had a chance to sleep together
He just went too fast
My hand slips under his shirt
It slides over the tight skin
Feeling his ribs
Just once
maybe we could sleep together
it could last all of eternity.
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Forgotten_soul
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2006-07-02 18:07:47]
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Re: NECROPHILIA
(User Rating: 1 )
by necrophilia_lord-abortion on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 08:15:29 AM AEST
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| not really wat i was expecting...i was expecting somethin about muder and then necrophilia with the body, not so much love...it was very short too, if u make it longer and chuck in some more descriptive words and stuff then it might be alright...personally i am only interested in dark poetry and i would say for u to make it a dark poem but not everyone likes the same stuff so u might be doing better in this category... |
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