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Sucide
Contributed by
shasha
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Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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These wrists I cut Forced to do it by emotions that run deep The blood that drips Is as red as ruby This didn't have to happen But it was my last resort Pushed to the limit This was my only way out There was no other choice No other solution I didn't even think I couldn't even feel As the knife cut deep All that was in my mind was death It didn't even happen So I'm still here About to jump off the cliff that I was pushed onto I can't feel anything but pain All other emotions have now disapeared Is this the life I'm fored to live? Will I try again? Or decide to live But if I live I promise you this I will have no love I will have no trust And I will only experience pain and hurt If you let me go though Let me die I might continue onto a happier place Somewhere where I just might be able to love again I beg of you Please choose to let me go I know deep down I'll be happier Just let me go Just let me go...
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shasha
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2003-02-09 10:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sucide
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheSpiritx on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 11:35:16 AM AEST (User
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Welcome to YPDC, shasha.
This is a good poem. You embody the concept of and the feelings behind depression very well. Sometimes this is exactly what people think, and it's sad. I've been there.
I suffered, and occasionally still do, from bouts of depression. Though never contemplated suicide, I definitely lost contact with my emotions. I hated myself and everything else, but the day came in which I developed an indifference to the world. Even now I find myself pushing away those who want to get close to me and denying what it is I feel. It hurts, but we all just have to fight it however we can.
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Re: Sucide
(User Rating: 1 ) by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 03:21:09 PM AEST (User
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this is beautiful...it's so everything i feel...beautiful... |
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Re: Sucide
(User Rating: 1 ) by alwys2nv on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:38:54 AM AEST (User
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beuatifully written, been there many times my self, keep up the good writting. |
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