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A problem shared, is a problem doubled
Contributed by
bigbadblinkybill
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Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 10:28:41 AM in AEST
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i've opened scars i thought had healed,
help me defend,
i have no sheild,
watch my fingers bend and break,
as i hold on to my mental state,
never ask if i'm okay,
i'll just lie
no words to say,
don't ever want to let you down,
so walk away,
just turn around,
i'll never hold it against you if you leave,
like a python,
your life i'll squeeze
it'll never stop, it'll **** your head,
and like me
you'll end up dead
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2006-07-03 10:28:41]
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Re: A problem shared, is a problem doubled
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by slayer_015 on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:30:14 AM AEST
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A poet after my own heart.I understand these scars.They never heal.They just hide for awhile.I hope they will hide again for you soon.
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Re: A problem shared, is a problem doubled
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by Ruby2sdy on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:37:18 AM AEST
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an understandable sentiment, and very nice poem, the flow of it works really well and it gets across your message perfectly, awesome,
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Re: A problem shared, is a problem doubled
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by deadclown on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 03:10:07 PM AEST
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great poem. sounds all too familiar to me. These are the kind of words I should be dedicating to someone. If you are reading this(u know who ur) I am so sorry for dragging u through my own personal hell. Didn't mean for u to get involved like this. U don't deserve it.
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Re: A problem shared, is a problem doubled
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 04:26:47 PM AEST
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| Good poetic ability. I dis-agree. The problem can be shared, and therefore, lessened for the agreeved. |
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