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Different from what we precieve?
Contributed by
fake_emptyness
on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 03:37:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
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boys will be boys,
girls will be girls.
in the end we're all the same.
we can never do anything different from one another.
Whats the point to being unique if we're all actully the same?
humanity discuses its self.
curse curse curse.
First name base's,
Last name crissis.
why name someone something when we'ere all the same?
EVERY word has been said,
EVERYONE else. thinks the same at one point in this time fragment we call life.
what feels so long is only so short.
you know you should live.
after all the earth, such years it lives.
and we dont even live half of its time period.
all sets of shapes. yet sets so same.
see what i say, see how you know you've thought it too.
see how you know you will think it through.
know its true, take these words, Eat them live them. take then and study them....
whats to life?
we're all different?
no, actully we're all quite alike.
your husband will beat you,
you'll grow to become a doctor.
you'll fail school,
you'll become homeless.
think about it. theres already people like that.
so? how are we all different?
this so called liveing ordeal is really fales.
unique, a word i know come to hate, fales like its meaning,
different different different.
come one, come all. see what we see everyday. oursleves in eachother.
boys will be boy.
girls will be girls.
which will be boys
who will be girls.
we're all one human.
one sick human...with a spande of what compasity will only be know to eachother.....
do come to help eachother.
after all. we're all the same. we're all one.
never happen you hate you. i hate me.
we hate us.
this is life, this is humanity. this is stupid.
now take yourself out of the picture.
can you seee much of a difference?
no, nor can i. i dont see a damn difference.
i take me out with you. still,
hopelessly no difference. only be show that we're all the same
so why not.
boys will be boys
who will be girls
as girls will be girls
who will be boys...
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2006-07-04 03:37:18]
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Re: Different from what we precieve?
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:20:20 AM AEST
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A rather strange write... you seem to firmly believe in your opinion, which gives your poem an added note of honesty, yet the sentiment behind it... no one can know for certain that we're 'all the same' as you say, because no one knows (truly) how each individual thinks, feels, reacts... we al respond differently to different situations - pacifists, war-mongers, rapists, counsellors... the world is full of people from varied backgrounds with varied and extremely complex emotions... surely the fact that I disagree with your sentiment proves you wrong - we aren't all the same? Anyhoo, surely it's food for thought, kudos, wel done on an interesting (if odd) write...
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Re: Different from what we precieve?
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by ReyAkARey on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 03:12:50 PM AEST
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