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Cigarette
Contributed by
trini
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Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:32:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Love is just like a cigarette
Pick it up and drag
Take it in and throw it out
Keep some in your bag
Everybodys watching you
Dont be a ********** fool
Take another drag again
Because youre ******* cool
Light you up
Get passed around
Suck you dry
Thrown on the ground
Crushed a little
To kill the spark
Left alone
Beside the park
Just like a cigarette
Is the message I can send
Love is just like a cigarette
It kills you in the end
Copyright ©
trini
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2006-07-04 08:32:50]
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Re: Cigarette
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:41:00 AM AEST
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Nice poem, very true sentiment, but it seems that however much I am made aware of the dangers of both these things, my heart and lungs are still addicted to both!!!
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Re: Cigarette
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:42:19 AM AEST
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well then.... i honestly like this poem alot and i understand where ur coming from with the message.... but... from self experience i have learned not to love just any1 and not to let just any1 love me. Walls r put up and never knocked down, anyways, this is a great poem and it sounds like u have a fear for love... only u can crack it... keep well ur a good writer!!!
savedbydeath
R*J
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Re: Cigarette
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by FlowerGrl on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 11:56:14 PM AEST
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| Good message. |
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Re: Cigarette
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by Cayleigh-Chan on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 08:53:49 AM AEST
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I loved the rhyming in this.
It was great.
Automatic fav!
Great work.
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