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dove
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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under the pale moonlight... she softley watches the shadows form a watchtower... under the stars of yesteryear she thinks on a distant life
beneath her shaded eyes... a blood tear falls into the crystal lake of life off into the darkness she stares unabashedly afraid of tomorrow... yet, sadistically wishing for the next trial
her thoughts transfer the distant life~ one she has only dreamt of in her hazy wakefullness, ~to present... as the blackbird watches protectively she instinctively falls to her shame ridden knees yet, she has not realized she no longer must abide by these rules
regaining her balance... she dreams on this distant life where clouds form castles and oceans send ripples of love through the hardened Earth
an earthquake threatens the "sanctuary" which took years to create... walls crumble to an untimely death as her soul walks the tightrope of sanity
the assassin roars out of tune no longer wanted here... but never truly gone uness the circle of serenity protects the white dove and delivers her essence from this torture...
who takes that chance? who dares to cross the line... to save the damsel in distress?
who, but she... must fight strong... must survive must love and be loved like the white witch who hung she will be absolved another day and see another sunset... and breathe another scent of life and love another more than herself if he exists
and, the moonlight is pale tonight... and the Earth is hardened... but learning to absorb the love of the ocean and the blackbird soars above the tender heart whilst the assassin vanishes and the soul regains place...
and the trueness allows her to live again and love again and smile again...
October 27, 1998
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Re: dove
(User Rating: 1 ) by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 05:32:40 PM AEST (User
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| beautiful, first one I read of yours and loved it, welcome to our site, |
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Re: dove
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 02:18:10 AM AEST (User
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| Post other poems written after your transitional period ie.. during the last four years...or ..you write newpoems.. keep them coming on for us..best of luck..venkat |
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Re: dove
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheSpiritx on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 02:57:56 AM AEST (User
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she will be absolved another day
and see another sunset... and breathe another
scent of life
and love another more than herself
if he exists
^^ I liked that part the most. Your poetic style is good and much appreciated. I'd like to see some of the poems you mentioned in a comment to me soon :) |
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Re: dove
(User Rating: 1 ) by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 02:27:17 AM AEST (User
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Ahh.... Lady Dama.... just wandering through the site and chanced upon this poem... I love this one too... as much as I love all your newer ones...
YS |
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