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Suppose it was a dream...
Contributed by
ThatGuyJay
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Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 02:47:31 PM in AEST
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Suppose it was a dream.
Etched into the seams.
For the days left to unfold.
Say it was a dream.
Would you fien.
Or become fiend.
Suppose it was a dream.
Merely a dream.
Led out into a stream.
Merely to erode and crode.
Copyright ©
ThatGuyJay
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2006-07-05 14:47:31]
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Re: Suppose it was a dream...
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:15:35 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!
Well if your knew to poetry I think this is a pretty darn good start.
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Re: Suppose it was a dream...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:48:09 PM AEST
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A big warm welcome to YPDC. I hope you enjoy it here. For a first submission this is pretty good. You'll find that with each new write you will get better. Goodluck and happy writing~
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Suppose it was a dream...
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 09:46:24 PM AEST
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welcome...nice post
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Re: Suppose it was a dream...
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by sensible_paper on
Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 05:23:19 PM AEST
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| wow nice write, hope you keep up thge good work... |
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