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True Thoughts My Precious One
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 04:12:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Thou are the object of my desire,
The very bearing on my soul,
Thy beauty is within thine eyes,
Thou love doth make me whole,
Thy passion arouses my senses so,
When thine body is close to mine,
Thy lips I kiss, what heavenly bliss,
And in earnest our bodies entwine,
Thy beauty shines out like the stars,
Thy love like summer sun,
Thee are the reason I may live,
For thou art my precious one.
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jerseysue
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2006-07-05 16:12:52]
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Re: True Thoughts My Precious One
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by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 04:57:06 PM AEST
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Well, you definitely succeeded!!!! Very sweet, and positively glowing with romance!!! Good one!
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Re: True Thoughts My Precious One
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 05:53:09 PM AEST
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Oh, please, please, please, don't under estimate yourself. This is very romantic, sensual, and very lovely.
I think it's an awesome poem.
Tim
(who's favorite poems to read are love poems and this one certainly was a joy to read)
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Re: True Thoughts My Precious One
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:09:01 PM AEST
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nicely done!
wiz |
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Re: True Thoughts My Precious One
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:10:34 PM AEST
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OK this is excellant, I feel you write well on any subject that you chose! Nice flow, just lovely.
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Re: True Thoughts My Precious One
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 09:11:27 PM AEST
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very well done
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Re: True Thoughts My Precious One
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 03:10:32 AM AEST
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| Its beautiful Sue, as all your poems are, you dont have to try your so talented.. xxx |
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Re: True Thoughts My Precious One
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by wrdz on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 08:44:47 PM AEST
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| See? With all these kinds of reviews, it's got to be the top of the mountains for you. Nothing less would do. Great job. Thank you for sharing wrdz |
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