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searching for a piece of me
Contributed by
madseeker
on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Searching for a piece of me
One I left behind
Perhaps its on a backyard swing
Or up that tree I climbed
I might have dropped it skipping rope
Or bouncing on the bed
Running barefoot through the city park
Or digging in the sand
When rustling trees created wind
Im sure I had it then
All I needed was the perfect wave
To bring me sailing in
Grassy hills were meant to roll down
Snow was made to throw
Maybe its sitting on the playground
My pocket had a hole
When clouds were really animals
And mountains sleeping men
Kool-aid was elixir
Jellybeans were vitamins
Promises were things you gave
And also things you kept
Once the things I couldnt change
Were things I could accept
When heaven was a place you go
To rest and be with friends
Back when love implied forever
Always meant it wouldnt end
Seeking just a little bit
Of me that Ive misplaced
Im sure that I could find it
If my steps could be retraced
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madseeker
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2003-02-09 15:00:00]
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Re: searching for a piece of me
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 03:07:09 PM AEST
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| beautiful imagery... well formed... the hope and sadness within this poem submits a strong parallel of life... makes me cry and smile at the same time... |
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Re: searching for a piece of me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 03:56:05 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Madseeker...This is a terrific poem..If your others are as good as this..you have yourself a new fan here.... Great work!!!
Jenni |
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Re: searching for a piece of me
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by roisin on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 06:56:34 PM AEST
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I too welcome you to this site...an excellent write!!
more please
rosie |
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Re: searching for a piece of me
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 09:11:29 PM AEST
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Wow I really like this! I can relate to it. Maybe I should retrace my own steps...
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: searching for a piece of me
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 10:09:03 PM AEST
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| Great write.. |
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