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As Night Fades to Dawn
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 07:18:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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By the lake she walks
As night fades to dawn
Into her world many
Are hopelessly drawn
Terror grips their soul
Nightmare or reality
No one is the same
Look in her eyes to see
She mirrors the worst
Of our hidden being
The truth lies raw
But it is worth seeing
The beast within us all
For our demons we must face
To move forward
They must be put in place
Then her lips sing a song
Of whom we truly are
And we find ourselves
To really be a shining star
Truth is she helps us let go
Of that which we must
To grow spiritually
In ourselves we must trust
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NoSaint
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2006-07-07 07:18:27]
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Re: As Night Fades to Dawn
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 07:43:33 AM AEST
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| This I feel is not abstract , but reality. We all have fears within us, and you have just shown them in written form. And we all need to realise we all have good in us too. A truly inspiring poem. Sue x |
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Re: As Night Fades to Dawn
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 03:20:09 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: As Night Fades to Dawn
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 12:04:49 AM AEST
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Shari~
Most pleasing and so inspiring. Alot of truth within the lines. I don't find it abstract though Shari~ rather reality more than anything. Well done my dear friend.
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: As Night Fades to Dawn
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by JGB on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 05:36:31 AM AEST
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I have come to love your writing. This is GREAT!
I feel as if I've been there.
lol
Joanna |
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