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Suffering Addict
Contributed by
Recovery_poet
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Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 08:52:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Suffering addict
Im lost in the void of empty time
My days, your years
Your loves, my fears
An addict lost in her internal riot of emotion
With only one option presenting a valid case
One rig
One blade
One tear and one goodbye
Shes balancing on the edge of her void
The decision has been made
Rig jams
Blade dulls
Tear is wiped from her tired face
Goodbye is stuck in her dry throat
Decision was made
Her spirit was not willing to join the eternal freefall of death
A friend she doesnt even know saved her
Her friend doesnt know she saved someone
These two friends may never meet
If they do they will never know their spirits joined as one
Suffering addict without hope and with only one option
Recovering addict with faith and twelve steps
Love your soul, Nurture your spirit
For the millions of friends youll never meet
And that one time they may need it!
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Re: Suffering Addict
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by MystycLore on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 03:09:21 PM AEST
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"Love your soul, Nurture your spirit
For the millions of friends you’ll never meet
And that one time they may need it! "
Sometimes we get so lost we forget those we touch or will...Thank you for the gentle reminder...May the pen provide strength and comfort when all is dark...~ML~ |
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Re: Suffering Addict
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 12:10:52 PM AEST
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The title is appealing, and it drew me in, and I am glad for it. I really enjoyed the (admittedly unexpected) positive message this poem has, and BIG time kudos to you as well---for overcoming that most difficult of hurdles...I like the way you told this. Thanks for sharing.
Scorp.
(Who thinks we ALL are suffering addicts of one thing or another, and loves the thought process the title evokes) |
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Re: Suffering Addict
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by Recovery_poet on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 12:17:07 AM AEST
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| thank you to you both and i am touched by your feed back |
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Re: Suffering Addict
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by sohangme on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 05:22:34 PM AEST
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| This touches a place in my heart for my son is a recovering addict...loved your poem and wish you all the best...its a hard road to drive down but you can do it! hugs |
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