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What If?
Contributed by
k2kdesigner
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Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 11:57:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What if she was still here?
Still here right next to me.
Next to me- so very near
I wonder how it would be...
I still keep thinking I'll see her some day
I'm still thinking she'll reappear
Only that day becomes further & further away
And I'm forgetting what it was like to have her here.
It hurts to face reality and trust she's gone forever
And it hurts to think that I can't see her pretty face
I wonder if it makes her sad that we can't be together
Is she mad that she has now lost this life-long race?
Because I'm mad - mad that she left me
It hurts to know I wasn't her choice
I hope that all my pain she can see
I hope she can see that I should've been her choice
Sometimes I think it helps for me to just sit and cry
I love her so much that I hate her for this
Why was she the one to die
Because now she's the one I'll always miss
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Re: What If?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 01:44:00 AM AEST
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Im so so sorry for your loss, seems like you cared for your mom very much.
very strong emotional writing... and that is the best kind. |
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Re: What If?
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 01:45:23 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for the sudden loss of your Mother~ She'll always be with you in ur heart.
I pray for God to heal the hurt u feel in ur heart real soon.
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: What If?
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 12:47:14 PM AEST
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I hope if nothing else, this felt good to write, and while doing so (I hope) brought about some pleasant memories of her...I'm so sorry for your loss, and I can't begin to imagine what that's like. Keep up the writes, and in due time I hope the pain dulls, and the happy memories increase...Take Care.
Scorp. |
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Re: What If?
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by evolon on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 04:00:21 PM AEST
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| i still find myself wondering will i see her , i find my self angry at god the world and her for leaving me, i find my self so filled with emotion i cant breath drowning in tears, trust me i know its hard but what holds me strong is i know she wanted the best of me at all times!... so when i look out to see if i feel her i try my best to make her proud cus when we do come together i wanna face her tell her how much i missed her how ***** i am she left and tell her i kept going trying my best like she wished!..... great write |
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Re: What If?
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by mama4lyf on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:25:39 PM AEST
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Very nice poem. I enjoyed it, and i even felt emotional reading it. Very deep.
Im very sorry for your losss. |
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