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A Strong Feeling
Contributed by
Jyssvw
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Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 04:18:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Just as the day halts
And the night takes precedence
I come to a stoppage of my own
And sit back and relive the moments
In a quiet secluded section of the beach
I sit and stare out into open nothingness
And await the stars, which each passing tide
The sand feels cool to the touch of my hands
The breeze is strong but easy
There is zero chance of rain
There is only time-
And the time is on hand
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2006-07-09 16:18:22]
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Re: A Strong Feeling
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by wizard on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:11:36 PM AEST
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sounds like a time...well written..
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Re: A Strong Feeling
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by wizard on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:12:31 PM AEST
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sorry...i meant to say it sounds like a 'great' time..
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Re: A Strong Feeling
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 12:02:11 AM AEST
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This has me wishing I still lived by the beach!! I miss going down there and watching the waves, and the stars...Nice write.
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Re: A Strong Feeling
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by brew on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 07:22:06 AM AEST
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The beach, is such a calm, serene, feeling. Seems it could take you from all thats there.....Just wished I was closer. Beautiful write.
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