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The Eternal Dance.
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 09:53:32 AM in AEST
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We dance through the night, our souls are so free,
our bodies in tune to the soft harmony,
your arms hold me close,our hearts are entwined,
we dance through the night, for us theres no time,
The fragrance of roses flow through the room,
buried together the bride and the groom,
today should of been our wedding day,
the car crash we had, stole that away,
This moment in time forever to share,
free from all worries, heartache and care,
invisible only our eyes can see,
for ever in love our destiny,
The music keeps playing, our favourite love song,
for ever for us the dance will go on,
I gaze in your eyes, your always be mine,
dancing together, till the end of time,
Our loved ones are bidding there final good bye,
if only they knew we never died,
our love is so perfect, our love is so strong,
this love that we have, forever lives on.
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lillyjane
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by Ruby2sdy on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 10:53:32 AM AEST
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Oh... so sad but sweet!!! To quote Philip Larkin "All that's left of us is love." A highly cynical writer, yet he penned this one line, which for me sums up existence entirely, great write,
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by alasdaircairns on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 12:25:54 PM AEST
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| This is simply wonderful, I hope we all get to be with our soulmates and families when we meet our maker. Divine poetry. Love it. x |
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 12:36:58 PM AEST
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| That is a beautiful poem, so well written, and it flows so well. Can visualise it so well. Thank you it was a real joy to read. I loved it. Sue xx |
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 04:38:26 PM AEST
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lilly~
This is breathtaking! Absolutely breathtaking!!
I especially love the last stanza.
This is what true love is, methinks.
A love that even death cannot dim!
Beautiful~
~Breezy |
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by candysears on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 04:55:37 PM AEST
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I can truly say, this is a beautiful write..
So sad...
I love this write...
Thanks for sharing this..
God Bless! |
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 11:11:51 PM AEST
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Lilly~
A sad, yet so beautiful write. An outstanding and superb write.
our love is so perfect, our love is so strong,
this love that we have, forever lives on.
Even after death love lives on forever, breath taking and beautiful. Well done Lilly~
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 10:21:08 AM AEST
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Gosh---I wasn't expecting the harsh twist : (
This is written quite beautifully though, and it was a pleasure to read, just the same. Thanks for sharing.
~Scorp. |
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 08:58:24 PM AEST
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Not only the couple's dance, but the sentiments are, eternal as well..
your emotion is endearing..
the final verse has me at a loss.. for I've never known such a love-
B- |
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 03:56:32 AM AEST
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Yes very sad yet so sweet.
i like this part the most
This moment in time forever to share
i love that |
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by Manda2 on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:50:32 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written, your words have created the image for everyone to imagine! Well done Lillyjane, a masterpiece! |
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 09:59:56 AM AEST
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love that flowng fragrance of roses
well done |
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by maestar on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 10:47:54 AM AEST
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lovely, I almost cried.lol.
very heart felt.
xxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: The Eternal Dance.
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by True on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 06:51:53 PM AEST
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| I liked it. It reminded me of a popular painting where several couples in tuxes and evening gowns seem to dance on a silver lake of glass. |
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