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Peaceful Request
Contributed by
lovespoetic0518
on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 03:49:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I spend the countless days,
Calming my soul with a sigh of smoke.
I used to know my way,
This tempered mind, so easy to provoke.
Tired now, endless qualms run in circles
Serenity surfaces only in moments.
Following life in a timeless charade,
I need a sign, to help the misfortune fade.
Indebted nevertheless of what's genuine to me,
It's just hard to breathe sometimes,
Thinking about past scenes.
My direction in the wind,
Drifts through the acceptance
Of what will transpire,
Looking forward to the fragrance,
Of peaceful desire.
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lovespoetic0518
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2006-07-10 15:49:27]
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Re: Peaceful Request
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by Ruby2sdy on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 04:12:50 PM AEST
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Very nice!!! How can you stay away for two years!!! I'm addicted!!! Welcome back, a very good poem to start you up again, hope you've not been absent due to writers block... what a pain that can be!!!
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Re: Peaceful Request
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by Davinah on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 03:51:51 AM AEST
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Very beautiful! I hope you're not thinking of leaving again soon :)
~D~ |
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Re: Peaceful Request
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 10:14:46 AM AEST
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Welcome back, Kimberly.....
Lovely bit of writing to herald your return.
Hope you find the peace you seek...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Peaceful Request
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 06:44:06 PM AEST
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hmm,you came back with some serious InnerVisions
smooth and silky.
may your tempered mind
be provoked
to flow
here....... |
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Re: Peaceful Request
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 08:29:55 PM AEST
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"Looking forward to the fragrance,
Of peaceful desire"
That was amazingly beautiful and touched me deeply.
A brave and conscious thought you have shared.
In all the melancholy that surrounds certain lines, I
see hope within this. And it's beautiful.
Wonderful post!
~Breezy |
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