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One lost flower
Contributed by
aliengirl
on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 10:23:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In her Rose's chest
she hides her lost inocence
The blood-liped girl
and jasmin skin
With the softest stare
i've ever seen
She reclines her head
on a white crown
a fog-filled melody
follows
and a black parade
sorrows
They speak of their loss.
the girl blessed by pain
says they
she died of wrath
that she gave up on love
at last.
They remember her pallid grin
and they pray
That instead of the pyre
her soul is ceased to Him
They give her back
to the dust
the last of their hopes
crushed by her grave
convinced she's too late to save
Though it started all with a knife,
though they thought
her eyes were shut
to a forever night
their foolish hearts
abstein their ignorance
and wont see
that in her breath,
There's still life...
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aliengirl
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2006-07-10 22:23:36]
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Re: One lost flower
(User Rating: 1 )
by Devil_in_disguise on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 02:53:54 AM AEST
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Señorita, tantos poemas que usted ha escrito, cuando piensa publicar mas!? Ande cabezona! ande!
(Mm...por otra parte, deberia sentirme afortunado de que solo yo tenga la oportunidad de leerlos todos)
Guardelos para mi entonces!
No, espera, que egoista de mi parte, si tienes un don, debees compartirlo con el mundo.
(Un momentito, el mundo no se ha portado muy bien con nosotros que digamos, porque deberiamos entonces...)
Bueno, señorita, quien te inspira? espero ser yo, asi que matanga! Para mi cada uno de tus escritos!
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