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FLAW
Contributed by
Davinah
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Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 12:38:05 AM in AEST
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You were the flaw in my fiendish master plan.
But I sold you down the river nevertheless.
You are out of your depth now.
Trying to fight fire with fire.
I suppose this unexpected turn of events
wont send you into raptures.
There is no room for rapprochement
once the bubble bursts.
And I wont budge on this deal.
You signed the dotted line.
And still you refuse to concede defeat
longing for one last moment of glory.
And you may cut a striking figure.
As you still think the world is at your feet.
But dont you believe it.
This is the beginning of the end
Copyright ©
Davinah
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2006-07-11 00:38:05]
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Re: FLAW
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 10:07:36 AM AEST
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Sometimes victory can be sweet, can't it? Especially when you've been on the losing end for so damn long...Reading this; I get the sense you're discussing something of a highly personal nature, as I can feel the strong emotions in your words. I enjoyed this piece because of that...Keep it up!
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Re: FLAW
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 01:58:46 AM AEST
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Davinah~
Well said my dear friend. You go girl~ I absolutely love how u bring ur point across to ur reader. Victory is so sweet, especially when the stakes are so high.
Well done and keep up the excellent work~
warm hugs,
suzie Q |
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