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Desertion On The Saddest Day Of My Life
Contributed by
sohangme
on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 02:00:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You said you would always be there
You were until now
But on the saddest day of my life
You are not there for me
You always held me and kissed away my tears
But my tears are flowing now
My heart can not take this pain
You said that no matter what
You would be my strength and my life
Now I want to die since you left me
My strength and my life are gone
What about our son?
You promised to help me raise him
Damn you! I need you now
The six men are lowering you into the ground
Why! Oh why!
Why did you desert me
On the saddest day of my life?
Copyright ©
sohangme
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2006-07-12 02:00:59]
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Re: Desertion On The Saddest Day Of My Life
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 04:00:57 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written. I'm so sorry for your loss.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Desertion On The Saddest Day Of My Life
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 05:23:02 AM AEST
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| That is so sad, so sorry for you.. ((hugs))) xx |
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Re: Desertion On The Saddest Day Of My Life
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 06:24:04 AM AEST
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First of all my condolences on your loss.My heart broke to read your emotional write. I'm so sorry for your loss. May ur heart heal real soon and just remember they never really leave us. They live on inside our hearts.
I would secondly like to welcome you to YPDC. I hope you enjoy it here. It helps ease the pain when we write about what pains our heart. May ur days ahead be much brighter.
love, hugs and heartfelt prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Desertion On The Saddest Day Of My Life
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 09:32:58 AM AEST
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| A Powerful poem, it says it all in just a few lines. Great write. Kimberly |
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Re: Desertion On The Saddest Day Of My Life
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by Smartie on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 09:13:22 AM AEST
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WOW! that was amazing, really very touching
Smartie |
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Re: Desertion On The Saddest Day Of My Life
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 09:12:36 PM AEST
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I reiterate Dreamer's sentiments, that the dearly departed never do leave us..
..and of course, you've known thus far, that she is right - He's always with you..
you've felt his presence in every happy moment..
but to know, also, that he is with you, every sad one as well, will set you free-
My condolences and deepest regrets to you my friend~
Many a' thought and prayer to you and yours~
B. |
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Re: Desertion On The Saddest Day Of My Life
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by sohangme on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 09:18:57 PM AEST
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I wanted to let all of you know that this did not happen to me. I didn't lose my hubby. Sometimes when I write i feel things deeply and i know this is the way I would feel if it did happen though. I appreciate all of your comments and sympathy and hope no one feels silly over wishing me well. I think all of you are nice wonderful people and i thank you!
Sincerely,
Nocole |
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