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The simple man
Contributed by
mindset
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Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 04:48:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Into this world thrown alone
No way up yet so fast down
Running around trying to work it all out
Give us some paint
We are only clowns
Look around so many good people
No matter what color
Or word of tongue
Try to see more than the mirror
Underneath that sky
We all stand
Cant we just pull together
Remain all of same
The truth not so far away
And for many fears wont be the same
Reach out time is short
Accept now whats inside
And cast aside doubt
Welcome our change
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2006-07-12 16:48:30]
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Re: The simple man
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by PoeticHybrid on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 04:52:14 PM AEST
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| Very well put. I like the way you ended it. |
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Re: The simple man
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 10:03:06 PM AEST
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This is some good advice.
Lovely write.
N_O |
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Re: The simple man
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 04:22:06 AM AEST
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| It is very good advice, really good poem. xx |
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Re: The simple man
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 04:29:08 AM AEST
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Reach out time is short
Accept now whats inside
And cast aside doubt
Welcome our change
i really like that
well done |
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Re: The simple man
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by jerseysue on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 12:56:23 PM AEST
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| yes life is a circus and we are the clowns. Good write, and yes we should pull together. This poem is very inspiring. Thanks for sharing it. Sue x |
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