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Where Is My Sun?

Contributed by zealousnatalie on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 04:50:36 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

All smiles til' my sun goes away.
Once again I feel alone.
Im not here and I say..
Where's my sun?
Thinking and wishing my sun would come my way.
Thinking til' I feel my mind and my soul drift away.
Left alone
Growing old
Feeling only pain
Where's my sun?
Where's my love?
Deep beyond the grave.

Copyright © zealousnatalie ... [ 2006-07-12 16:50:36]
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Re: Where Is My Sun? (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 04:54:55 PM AEST
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Nice write. A sad ending though.

Re: Where Is My Sun? (User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 06:03:49 PM AEST
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nice write...very deep. sad ending. keep up the good work

rich

Re: Where Is My Sun? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 10:13:04 PM AEST
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This is really deep.
Good write.

N_O

Re: Where Is My Sun? (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 01:09:14 PM AEST
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This is almost like the opposite to You are my sunshine, that tune from the 30's (And Oh Brother Where Art Thou!) Really poignant and sad, yet perfectly concise.

Re: Where Is My Sun? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 10:10:58 PM AEST
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This is beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. A truly expressive write.

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