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Petals Passed are Found in Ground
Contributed by
alasdaircairns
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Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:30:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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As dreams collide and liars mime,
They find it hard to tow the line,
These noble aims are not so fine,
As we have learnt time after time.
Long drip fed garbage dressed as praise,
And shifting through this dark malaise,
Long wasted hours trapped in a maze,
Of morbid nights and groundhog days.
Those sepia morns of early spring,
Of rainbows, streams and magic things,
Have faded to the cynic's eye,
This flower fading, wilting, dies.
But petals passed are found in ground,
To feed the seed that lies in mound,
Which brings the loop of life around,
And plays the faeries folkish sounds.
From desperation, born is hope,
New futures cleanse the past like soap.
A newborn flora flatters slopes,
Such beauty new found revoked.
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Re: Petals Passed are Found in Ground
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by bigbadblinkybill on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:36:56 AM AEST
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Re: Petals Passed are Found in Ground
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by Keilantra on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 11:15:40 AM AEST
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you had me form the first line. I'm constantly saying that flow is important in poem, and here you have a fabulous one. Very nice poem~keep it up!
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