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All When Good Men Do Nothing
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 03:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Strange, how that in valley ball, I always use to win
Boys would chase me round the school and back again
But when it came to true-love Ive been at a disadvantage
The good men, who did nothing, left it for fools advantage
Yet God had a prophet marry an unfaithful prostitute
And I married a sold-out fool, that wasnt such a hoot
Its not that Im competitive, except when it come to God
I started young confronting Him about my Authority Rod
Do others really now see me, a kingdom whole, complete
When grief, for past fools fancy, has tied me to Christ feet
Surrendering all, He knows the wall, to shelter me from pain
Has destiny kept me locked away or was it defence of distain
Men wish to put me on a pedestal or either beneath them, low
Ive travelled far, beyond the stars, to see where I must go
Theres only one thing I hate, thats silence from no response
Truths priority (biblically) would seem of no real relevance
Men leave me alone thinking I could never descend their level
Destiny calls me higher when all I need is a mate, Gods bevel
Silly to want a mate my own when all I need is comfort, shown
Til counting the cost of my walk with God, of hatred blown
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Re: All When Good Men Do Nothing
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by Ruby2sdy on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 05:36:14 PM AEST
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Yeah, men, I'd say who needs them, but well... a good one's definitely for keeps! A nice write, really gets out your anger/frustration, I enjoyed it!
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Re: All When Good Men Do Nothing
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by richcol7522 on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 05:48:38 PM AEST
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Very deep. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up.
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Re: All When Good Men Do Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 06:30:31 PM AEST
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| Liked this a lot |
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Re: All When Good Men Do Nothing
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 04:38:56 PM AEST
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| Excellent, I must read more. |
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