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The Colours of my Life
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 04:37:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Paint a picture of my life,
And try to make it true,
See the tears I have cried,
So paint this background blue,
See the summers I have spent,
Where things were all so mellow,
Add the calmness of my thoughts,
And paint this section yellow,
The memories of love I had,
Spin round in my head,
Draw a picture of my heart,
And paint this section red,
The grief I had and sad times,
The confidence I now lack,
Should be painted liberally,
In only one colour that is black,
When grief had subsided,
With each passing day,
It lightened the blackness,
So paint the edges grey,
For the hope in the future ,
The dreams yet to be seen
An exciting adventure,
Paint this fresh start green,
Is there someone I know,
Who makes my future bright,
Brand new and so special,
Paint this section white
So the picture is complete,
And it seems that its true,
My life has been a rainbow,
And at the end of it was you
Copyright ©
jerseysue
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2006-07-13 16:37:48]
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Re: The Colours of my Life
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by Ruby2sdy on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 05:33:00 PM AEST
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I really love this one! Another brill write, sue! You never disappoint! Thanks for sharing your thoughts, I was actually painting a picture in my head as I read it! Awesome!
Tuesdayx |
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Re: The Colours of my Life
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 06:07:54 PM AEST
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Beautifully done!! Well crafted poem..
Jenni |
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Re: The Colours of my Life
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by Bruce on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 03:57:35 AM AEST
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| every word is just perfect |
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Re: The Colours of my Life
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by Spike on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 07:15:21 AM AEST
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Awwh, how sweet is that? (I literally went awwwh! at the end).
Clever and vivid life-collage. Colour my life indeed. |
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Re: The Colours of my Life
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 11:35:02 AM AEST
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Wow, what a very lovely poem. The imagery is so brilliant I could see the picture being painted in my mind as I read.
Excellent, Sue, excellent.
Thank you,
Tim
:-)
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Re: The Colours of my Life
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 02:20:09 AM AEST
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| I love this we associate colours with so many things and you have put it in to words so clever, its beautiful Sue...xxx |
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