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The Dirt on dirty bones
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 03:31:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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i walk along the edge of sky
and tap my toes on stones
i love what's caught now in my eye
the dirt on dirty bones
see, i've always liked the dirty side
of life.. and beauty too
i paint what i once tried to hide
cause it's my duty to
the darkest pain black oil stain
contained by canvas blue
see the spiral's mindful strain
reflecting back in you
a skull for head but body strong
grips a flower's stem
the petal's pain does not belong
to you, to me.. or him
the swirling red moves heavy lead
thick blood throughout the vein
in madness it's hot soup instead
like sticking pitchforks in my brain
now it's time to fade...
dw
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Re: The Dirt on dirty bones
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by Shmokin on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 05:23:23 PM AEST
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| Pleasent read, thanx for sharing :-) |
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Re: The Dirt on dirty bones
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by Keilantra on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 10:05:56 PM AEST
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This was very beautiful and abstract. i really enjoyed your imagery. I sort of felt as if i was in a painting. The first line was capturing and you ended it well. Great job, Keep it up.
xXx
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Re: The Dirt on dirty bones
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by redsleeve on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 07:16:51 AM AEST
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"the petal's pain does not belong"
great stuff. |
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