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The End
Contributed by
Sahara
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Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:22:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The story has come to an end,
The promises erased into oblivion,
No more baby this, baby that,
The "I love yous" can't be took back,
No more me, no more you, and no more us,
There wont be anymore vying for one anothers trust,
No more of my boring inane conversation,
No more of that happiness - thats so rare, no more of that odd sensation,
Now theres nothing left for us,
Besides the obvious mistrust,
There wont be anymore of this game,
For awhile I really thought you felt the same,
Im more than a little jaded yes but I do love you,
I just have no one left to tell it to,
I tried to change for you; but its obvious from my actions tonight its just not something I can do,
Im jealous, Im petty this is true but Im not a complete fool
Copyright ©
Sahara
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2006-07-15 02:22:51]
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Re: The End
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:40:18 AM AEST
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Very sad but really well written.
I've been there more times than I'd ever say.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The End
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:48:16 AM AEST
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Guess this makes it twice. Glad to see you've found some inspiration, granted I'd wish if you ever wrote about me again, it could be on a happier note. I don't take back anything, except for all the stupid ***** I've done, none of which, were cheating on you. But why start believing me now, right?
You wouldn't be so jaded if you believed anything I said. If you actually ever listened to me, like you claim to. You can't fix something when only one person wants it to work, and this time - that one person wasn't you.
I still love you, and meant it when I said it.
Beautiful write, sad, but - beautiful.
I'm sorry, for everything I didn't do for you.
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Re: The End
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 09:04:39 AM AEST
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| A very nice read. Emotional and from the soul. Great write! Kimberly |
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Re: The End
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by ButchCorpuz on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:48:23 PM AEST
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Wow... Your words just described the state where I've been struggling to get out of for 6 months now. Thanks! Great write!
-Butch
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