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Me and him
Contributed by
kira
on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:50:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Me and Him
First we were friends
Together we used to set up trends
Then he changed
His friendship evolved to something unnamed
He said it was love
By swearing on a flight of Dove
His infatuation made him do it
Still he felt unsure a bit
Love! Hormones! Lust!
Him I still couldnt trust
Around me, he felt pretty uncomfortable
It was like in an audience, he was atop a table
Finally for both of our sake I had to end it
He tried a lot to mend it
By writing Woeful Ballads and Poetry
Which at that time didnt affect me
He stopped trying finally
At that point Realization struck me I cared for him deeply
He moved ahead in life, as life goes on
Leaving me behind in his book of life like a page unknown
In his Heart my place was occupied by my friend
Now I became his X girlfriend
She was with him till she received gifts
After that their relationship started to drift
Finally she broke up
Leaving him again with a shattered Heart
I wanted to soothe his soul
But he ignored me piercing my heart and making a hole
He showed himself strong yet again
But I knew and felt his pain
I knew His heart bled from the cut
Hard outside, soft inside just like a coconut
I still feel guilty when I stare into his eyes
My heart feels his anger! And cries
I wish I could go back in time
And again he could be mine
I would again be in his arms
And together we would dance
But as time could not be reversed
Together we both would have to face this curse
If one wish of mine could be fulfilled
I would ask for our relationship to be rebuilt
Now there is no point crying over spilt milk
He would always remain a king to me dressed in silk
Copyright ©
kira
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2006-07-15 02:50:24]
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Re: Me and him
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:04:54 AM AEST
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U did a great job with this.
wow very good writing.
huggs,
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Re: Me and him
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by TheSpiritx on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:36:42 AM AEST
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You've got some creative rhymes and concepts presented pretty well here.
This is a great first submission and I hope to see more from you soon.
Welcome to YPDC.com, kira, hlad to have you!
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