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An Unrelated Incident
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:29:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Medicated, inebriated,
So damn disorientated,
Confiscated,
Completely wasted,
I want to be with you.
Complicated,
Kind of sedated,
Thinking things that should be x-rated,
Wonder why Im feeling so deflated,
I want to be with you.
Love was fated,
Dont be berated,
Birthday wishes by now belated,
What was it again that we created?
I want to be with you.
Over-debated,
Not yet sated,
Really glad that were not related,
I think this poem will remain unrated,
I want to be with you.
Conjugated, reinstated,
Unabated,
And too long awaited,
The world of literature now desecrated,
I want to be with you.
Breath baited,
Should have waited,
But oh no, instead, it was you I dated,
Cant remember the last time I mated,
I want to be with you.
Words translated,
Subjects skated,
All of my problems are interrelated,
These words of mine will probably be slated,
I want to be with you.
Now elated.
Feling weighted,
Fashion sense is understated,
A rubber ring lies inflated,
I want to be with you.
Separated,
And segregated,
Heart broken by things stated,
Like a block of cheese now fully grated,
I want to be with you.
Copyright ©
Ruby2sdy
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2006-07-15 03:29:12]
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Re: An Unrelated Incident
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:45:51 AM AEST
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Wow now I like this.
U r a very talented writer.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: An Unrelated Incident
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 06:42:13 AM AEST
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| lol this is very good. enjoyed reading this. i was gonna leave you a comment in the same rhyme scheme but meh you've taken every word i could think of lol. |
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Re: An Unrelated Incident
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 07:24:53 PM AEST
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lol..I wasn't aware that, there were THAT many words that rhymed with "ated"
and I DID enjoy it.. very much..lol
(L4 in the final stanza..lmao)
"Like a block of cheese now fully grated,"
I've a feeling you were running low there-
..great nonetheless-
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