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The Crisis
Contributed by
Lancaster
on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 10:22:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Calling the shots
From protected barriers
Inside the walls of safety
Where nothing enters without clearance
From up top
The ground looks empty
As it rises the view begins to drop
Until it becomes nothing
And everything goes dark
In the meantime
There is nothing to do but cry
The sound of prayer has diminished
A faith rots
Tomorrow has been written
In the pages of the night
Comprehensive strategies
To overcome the war waged for years
_________
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Copyright ©
Lancaster
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2006-07-15 10:22:33]
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Re: The Crisis
(User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 06:20:10 PM AEST
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very woeful and forlorn..
fantastic finale..
well written.. be well friend-
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