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Your colours took mine away
Contributed by
deadclown
on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 05:52:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Is this the end
I've seen the signs
I feel lonely again
cos the sun never shines
I saw red in your eyes
like you wanted me dead
I'm so scared
Please help me
This is not in my head
I should've gone home
I shouldn't have stayed
cos now I'm alone
I wish I could pray
I saw blue in your heart
cos you know it's the end
Let me go on my own
I was not a good friend
I'm feeling so strange
I can't take this no more
Wish I could change
all the things that I saw
You had black in your love
and I wanted to kill
but I can't
I'm too tired
this is making me ill
I'm sorry to say
but my heart has gone numb
The daylight is over
now darkness has come
no colours have I
cos I know that it's time
for my life to end
Today I will die
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Re: Your colours took mine away
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by bigbadblinkybill on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 01:49:47 AM AEST
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well said, very emotional. know the feeling well too, to wake up and see that things are different are always bad. to look at that special person and see hate in their eyes and the cold of their heart is not a happy place to be. there is no place to hide so we detatch our emotions ( ie "die")
hope you find the happiness you deserve and i am sorry life has not treated you well but look for that rainbow and your colours will return x |
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Re: Your colours took mine away
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by wizard on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 06:01:56 PM AEST
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sad indeed...nicely done!
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Re: Your colours took mine away
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by blackholesun2006 on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 03:05:37 PM AEST
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nice write
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Re: Your colours took mine away
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 07:01:02 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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