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I Wait In Cold Rain
Contributed by
The_Unknown
on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 02:03:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The cold rain
softly touches my face
your warm hand touching mine
holding it
guarding it from the cold
As fast as you came
lightning strikes through the air
and whips you away
I'm left standing there
in the freezing cold rain
no one would believe it
believe you were actually there
I wait there now
for you to come back
I still wait
I wait
for the thunder to roll in
I wait for you
I wait for the lightning to strike
I beg of you to take me with you
but you won't
so
I'm still waiting
I'm waiting for you to return
Copyright ©
The_Unknown
... [
2006-07-16 02:03:24]
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Re: I Wait In Cold Rain
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by deadclown on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 05:13:13 PM AEST
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| very sad poem. Sad but beautifully written |
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Re: I Wait In Cold Rain
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by dagonet on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 02:07:22 PM AEST
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exellent poem, i loved the flow, the subject and mainly the ending, brilliant write, good talent
dont let go of the talent, u may regret it more than u can handle, trust me on that one
ryan x
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