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Love
Contributed by
ItsMikey
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Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 09:45:26 PM in AEST
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The look on your face..
The clothes on your waist..
The smell of your perfume..
The sound of your voice..
Even when it is scolding me..
I cannot shake the feelings that are taking a hold of me..
Every single time I hear your name..
My heart flies high..
Then plummets to the ground..
All because, I see you with a frown..
And even though..
You will never be mine..
I still hope you can find your true love..
Hopefully it will be as much..
As I know ours could be..
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ItsMikey
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2006-07-16 21:45:26]
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Re: Love
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by slayer_015 on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 10:43:33 PM AEST
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That was a beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brian |
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Re: Love
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by sohangme on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 12:44:02 AM AEST
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| good poem..I like the way you expressed yourself |
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Re: Love
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 06:08:49 AM AEST
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well done keep writing your flow will improve as you express yourself more
NS |
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Re: Love
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by deadclown on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 06:17:34 PM AEST
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| sorry I'm a bit drunk right now so I don't know if I make sense but I've read both your poems.Are they about the same person or are they just random poems? Cos if they are about one person maybe you should have a bit of a chat with whoever this is to let them know how u feel.Life's too short and all that stuff. You never know u might be suprised. Good poem though. Again sorry if I'm just chatting nonsense |
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Re: Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:12:26 PM AEST
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| i know what it is like to love someone and not be able to have them. i hope things work out. thats a good poem. keep on. |
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