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Speechless
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 07:00:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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All will stop heart, life, and sound
A smile so sweet leaves you bound
A look a glance in her way
Your eyes will linger there they stay
As if transfixed in mirth
Simply to hold her gorgeous girth
A lasting smile to draw you in
All your words cast in the bin
Speechless you smile, all you can
Like a child and not a man
This she knows you can tell
The way she glanced when you fell
Verily her smile does remains
Her heart so gentle sweet and plain
The words she speaks are so true
To take with you in what you do
A dream remains for the touch
To show her love so very much
Alas my day may never come
I have done the math, seen the sum
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2006-07-17 07:00:32]
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Re: Speechless
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by yackerz85 on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 09:36:20 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem. It sounds like she took your breath away. This poem is great proof of love at first sight. |
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Re: Speechless
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by luckycharm on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 04:37:48 PM AEST
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| this poem was very beautiful and well written. Keep up da good work and I hope 2 see more of your writing!.-luckycharm |
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Re: Speechless
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 08:13:43 PM AEST
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Sounds like u died-n-went to heaven.
Hey, math don't count in life. All ya need to do is let her read this and she'll come running.
This write is heavenly beautifull!
A masterpeice that when stand behind any one's luv.
Guess u know by now, I luved it. If I were she I'd follow u any where u wanted me to go.
Awesome heart smile,
emy |
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