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submission of a soul
Contributed by
blackholesun2006
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Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 02:11:56 PM in AEST
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given into lifes hard truth,
we take for granted
food and roof
but what if these where no more
and igloos seem to close their door
around us there are whips and chains
unlawful chatter
and spiteful names
we seem to convince them that lifes a choice
but thats not true
so please rejoice
pray to heaven or even hell
take a blade
and clean it well
lift the fingerprints of true
they point in no direction
but we know its you
we know that your the one to blame
so prapare for death
we know your name........
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Re: submission of a soul
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by deadclown on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 03:03:35 PM AEST
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| Where did that come from? Love the last 2 lines. Your medication is obviously workin now |
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Re: submission of a soul
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by doug on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 09:59:52 AM AEST
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This is interesting. I admit I don't know to whom you refer . This poem however seems to speak of finding someone and making them suffer. I like the sound of that . HaHAhA.
Take care , doug |
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