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This Should Never Have Been Written
Contributed by
Lancaster
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Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 06:14:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Everybody has plans
Dreams they wish, but are aware, they may never fulfill
The trick is to be happy in the moments of ordinary
So that simple dreams are readily available
Reaching for the sky brings stars crashing down
Disturbing the progression of the earth around the vast sun
Sometimes are segments of a larger scheme with a purpose
To shadow the enchainment with a disguise crafted to intrigue
Be gentle with fragile pieces which hold value of sentimental-
Quality is found in the craftsmanship within the inventors skilled hands
Huddled in bunkers where trenches are dwarfed to apartment complexes
Are hordes of citizens driving in droves towards the outskirts of their lives
A mass exodus of feeble-mindedness now penetrates new borders
Reverberated by an echoed swirl of something grand floating in the air
A free-sample of lead by example is given to all who walk through the door
An express checkout with bags of rags to help clean the blood from its core
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Lancaster
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2006-07-17 18:14:27]
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Re: This Should Never Have Been Written
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by Keilantra on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 07:37:02 PM AEST
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Reaching for the sky brings stars crashing down
Disturbing the progression of the earth around the vast sun
That was the best line, very original.
xXx
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Re: This Should Never Have Been Written
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 10:48:59 AM AEST
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But aren't shooting stars so beautiful? We all need to reach for them sometimes, otherwise we become another statistic, just a name on a list, this poem was very well written, made me think, thanks,
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