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NEARLY RICH
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 06:49:46 AM in AEST
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I sit with my ticket the lotteries on,
I dont think i'll win, its just for fun,
my heart starts to pound, hang on a minute!!
my numbers are rolling, am I going to win it,
All my numbers are sitting there,
can hardly look, through my fingers I stare,
no more worries, no more care,
Im rich, Im, rich !!!! a millionaire
Now what will I do my mind starts to race,
go round the world, best pack my case,
slow down. slow down,just try and think,
wheres the wine, I need a drink,
I cant believe, Ive won such a lot,
quick get the phone, ring camelot,
I cant sleep, Im up all night,
have I really won?? just doesn't seem right,
big houses fast cars, holidays abroad,
everything now I can afford,
money for friends, family to,
my favourite charities, theres quite a few,
Next day from camelot, comes the call,
Im so disapponted, feel such a fool,
seems I have blown it, not got it right,
my ticket was for another night,
weary and crying take to my bed,
a while a winner, but just in my head.
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lillyjane
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Re: NEARLY RICH
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by maestar on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 10:39:12 AM AEST
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oh how horrible I'de hate that. Great write, very funny.
mae.xxx |
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Re: NEARLY RICH
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by Winterland on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 12:40:27 PM AEST
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How terribly disappointing! I do hope it isn't a true story!
Great writing. It was so easy to get into.
Jennifer |
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Re: NEARLY RICH
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 12:59:27 PM AEST
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| This made me laugh, its the type of thing what would happen to me. Mind you my friends brother won it, only £500,000 , but that would be very nice. Sue x |
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Re: NEARLY RICH
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by Manda2 on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 07:47:52 PM AEST
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| A fantastic write, mind you, you can't lose what you never had! I loved this poem, it was really funny and very well written. |
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Re: NEARLY RICH
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 06:15:29 PM AEST
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Yowch!!! That'd hurt!!
enjoyable read, lillyjane. Hope that didn't really happen.
lol
~Breezy |
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Re: NEARLY RICH
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by Catalina on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 05:31:21 AM AEST
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| thanks 4 sharing this. I enjoyed |
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