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The Death Of The Pain
Contributed by
lilbabe
on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 03:20:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I would rather feel nothing
Than this pain I endure
The torture of my soul
The destruction of a heart so pure
So I hold the glistening metal
To drain it all away
I barely feel...just slight relief
My spirit has decayed
Don't fear for me
Don't lose sleep
And at my funeral,
I beg you not to weep
The pain is gone
I cannot feel
Six feet under
Cause the hurting was so real
Remember me
But do not cry
Life wasn't worth living
Thus, I shall die
Copyright ©
lilbabe
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2006-07-18 15:20:11]
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Re: The Death Of The Pain
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by luckycharm on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 04:00:44 PM AEST
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| When I read this poem I sensed that u are really hurting on the inside and if u believe in god he tells us that he won't put more on us than we can bare. So when u are hurt or feeling down just pray because god always makes a way. This poem was very deep and the emotion of this poem makes u hooked 2 it. Keep up the good work. Very well written.-luckycharm |
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Re: The Death Of The Pain
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by drtylilsecret on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 06:43:25 AM AEST
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oooh, dark, fantastically written, totally feel the pain and can relate, absolutely loved it.
~natalya
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