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Unforeseen
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 06:55:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The unexpected,
sown seeds of self -doubt
Which multiply rapidly,
and invade us throughout
A challenge to our stamina,
causing confusion
Difficult to prepare ahead of time,
to draw any conclusions
No magical powers have I
Struggle daily just to get by
Try not to get depressed
All anyone can do,
is their very bset
To avoid a state of distress
May I be so bold as to suggest
A good thought to keep in mind,
This too shall pass,
Is one approach of mine
We struggle to avoid total defeat
To maintain an attitude,
of being discreet
Who knows what will transpire
Must prevent matters,
from becoming a quagmire
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2006-07-18 18:55:50]
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Re: Unforeseen
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 02:30:26 AM AEST
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Very wise points, from a very wise man. Thank you for sharing, my friend. Always a pleasure to read you.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Unforeseen
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 02:58:43 PM AEST
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An excellent write, Will.....so many truths..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Unforeseen
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 07:45:59 PM AEST
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Do you know that Laura has posted this in the 'best poem of the day' thread in the forums?
I'm glad she did.
I have been away from your poetry for a short while, my friend, and I apologise for that. I've been missing out, once again.
Some good wrods here, and some that many of us can relate to and understand easily.
I hope you feel better soon my friend.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Unforeseen
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 05:20:32 PM AEST
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Wil, so tortured our souls can become, no?
I feel ya in this ... and relate. If I could surmise this
piece with a single word? depth my friend .. truly
hopeful thoughts sent your way ..
~Breezy
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Re: Unforeseen
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 10:53:51 AM AEST
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I believe Terry, that I shall return to this a few times as I progress through my recovery. I doubt that you wrote it with me in mind ... but I must say it fits me right now more than anything I've read recently. Yes, "this too shall pass" and life will go on, returning to so sense of normalicy. Thank you Terry, for the sence of peace and strength that lies within this piece.
Nazzy ~ |
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