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Heartbreak City
Contributed by
BrokenxbyManyx
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Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 02:33:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Could I have been the only one in his life?
Was everything he told me a flat out lie?
I'm not completely naive.
I know I wasn't the "first" and sadly not the last.
Some other girl will fall for your charm.
Maybe she'll fall harder than I did.
I really hate him.
And I'm afraid to ever face him again.
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Re: Heartbreak City
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by wrdz on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 03:23:29 PM AEST
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| Isn't it nice to be able to get it out of your system, and off of your chest? You feel much better by now. Don't you? Writing, whether poetry or just writing to get it out. It seems to work. Very nicely done here. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz |
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Re: Heartbreak City
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by sohangme on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 05:23:43 PM AEST
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| Good job...keep going |
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Re: Heartbreak City
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by spencer on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 09:07:16 AM AEST
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| i think its good! reminds me of a relatiohship i used to be in, if i ever see her again it'll be a million years too soon! |
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