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Denied By God
Contributed by
axeman
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Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 10:06:23 PM in AEST
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Denied By God
By Fernando Castillo
He is the father who abandoned his children in their moment of great need
I cried for salvation, deliverance from pain
Nevertheless he paid no heed
Streams of tears flooded my hollow of eyes of despair
The pain I endured will forever be beyond compare
My life deteriorated, decayed and rotted
To be food for the starved worms
Pulsating swan song of harmonious discord
Tranquil cacophony
My callous heart abhorred
As I laid, dying for the elucidation of life
I conceded my defeat
Succumb to Gods malice
This pain inflamed
Eternal abiding wretchedness
Copyright ©
axeman
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2006-07-20 22:06:23]
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Re: Denied By God
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 05:15:19 AM AEST
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Well done, deep and strong, thanks for the read, I enjoyed the write.
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Re: Denied By God
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by Tashy on
Wednesday, 15th October 2008 @ 05:23:14 AM AEST
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such a powerfulpoem.
i can relate.
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Re: Denied By God
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by Alphadux on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 09:15:54 PM AEST
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| There's a lot of feeling in this and you use a variety of words which is good. And if I may inject my faith into the comment: "All who call upon the Lord will be saved". He won't deny those who come to Him. |
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