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Sorrow at Dusk
Contributed by
MaMort
on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 11:34:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Sorrow at Dusk
Slender beams of sunlight enter
this darkened room as I kneel,
always sorrowful, always hopeful,
frozen here,
waiting.
Tortured forms wrought in panes of glass loom as
dust dances in the air,
forming an image in my mind,
the night falls without a sound
With paleness on my face....
I raise my head, now embracing
this uncaring reality,
And now the shadows that surround me cry,
save us from ourselves.
Copyright ©
MaMort
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2006-07-20 23:34:42]
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Re: Sorrow at Dusk
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 10:11:11 AM AEST
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Enjoyable read. I really dug the second stanza. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Sorrow at Dusk
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 12:30:59 PM AEST
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Great emotion enjoyed the read!
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