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Gone
Contributed by
silverscent
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Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 06:55:58 AM in AEST
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I used to yearn for our enveloped photographs
to awaken -- again, embracing us in a
warm memory since gone,
and according to my calendars that was
a long time ago
Now, I marvel why the snapshots arent yet
covered in dust, only to reminisce that
the memories are more whimsical
in mind than in reality. Fortunately,
my indulgence in solitude has removed
cobwebs that had veiled our shared years.
See -- air smells sweeter without
you breathing it before me,
and pillows feel fresher with only
my hair caressing them. The knot is untied,
and the white memorial marking on my finger
has healed and forgotten our past.
I have space to renovate myself
in todays images, express myself, now
your brawny shadow has gone.
Copyright ©
silverscent
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2006-07-21 06:55:58]
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Re: Gone
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by spencer on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 11:16:08 AM AEST
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| fantasticly written, i this is poem convays so many different emotions |
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Re: Gone
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:40:54 PM AEST
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A beautiful emotional piece of writting.
Excellent.
Jeff |
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Re: Gone
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by BOZEEN on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 02:26:53 PM AEST
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| that was great,getting rid of the baggage. |
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