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Porcelain Perfection
Contributed by
True
on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 10:15:59 AM in AEST
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I am a perfect doll
fragile and delicate
see my painted smile
every curve
every shape
every line
is crafted to perfection
but who loves a doll of glass?
They set me on a shelf
admire me for my beauty
put on display
but I'm never played with
never held by a loving child
I am not loved
only admired
no child tells me their secrets
or shows me their special place
they don't tell me I'm sick
then make me well again
for perfection has no ills
I cannot be taken down from my pedestal
lest i shatter
from the pleasant pressure
of love
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True
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Re: Porcelain Perfection
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 10:02:21 PM AEST
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I absolutely loved this....and think it can be related to real life also....
Good write..
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Re: Porcelain Perfection
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by shinji_kusa on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 10:32:44 PM AEST
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very interesting, and for yet another time i find myself drawn to poetry i dont normaly like lol, think my right brain is taking over my left. great poem tho
-Jason |
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Re: Porcelain Perfection
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 09:01:42 AM AEST
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very good. i think i can see a metaphor there somewhere...
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Re: Porcelain Perfection
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 07:30:36 AM AEST
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And they stare at you with those eyes that are always open. They kinda scare me. ;-)
I like reading your work. You write with such finesse and creativity.
Thank you for a lovely read and get a set of Legos.
Tim
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