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Shadowy Unknown
Contributed by
True
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Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 11:48:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Doubt
Nothing is sure
My childhood is gone
Faded into shadows
My future looms
Shadowy and threatening
Dont leave me Mommy!
Dont leave me Daddy!
Im not ready to grow up
Wheres Peter Pan when you need him
Future
Such a dark and sinister word
Ive lived each day
But they flew away from me
A caged bird
Freed from entrapment
Have they no loyalty?
I loved them
Wont they love me?
Return to me
Beloved days
That I might live thee again
And never go forth
Into the dark unknown
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True
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2006-07-21 11:48:00]
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Re: Shadowy Unknown
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 12:25:33 PM AEST
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This is really good I loved how you added Peter Pan. Good luck with your new journies.
We always have that small child within us nomatter where we go or how old we get, let the child shine and life is alot of fun!!
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Re: Shadowy Unknown
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by Spike on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 08:35:24 PM AEST
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Amen to that. Youth and its fresh and wild visage gets tainted far too quickly- hold on to at least some aspects of childhood in your head and heart.
I remember my own moment when that sense of loss of your parent's really hits you. It's like having the rug pulled from under you. Best of luck, and thanks for posting a poem that captured those feelings so well.
Spike |
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Re: Shadowy Unknown
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 09:54:00 PM AEST
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Good write!! Where DO the years go??
Best of luck at college...
Jenni |
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Re: Shadowy Unknown
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by doug on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 09:58:29 PM AEST
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| Perhaps this shadowy unknown is not so bad. Many times I've put my past upon a pedestal like some porcelain perfection yet those memories I loved faded in grace untill finally they were nothing but silence. It is better I think to go forth to search for that pleasant pressure of love even though it could very well shatter you. You have hoped for others to find their castle . I'm convinced that they would want the same for you. good luck out there , truly , doug |
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Re: Shadowy Unknown
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 07:37:05 AM AEST
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Well, it's almost three years later. How are you doing? Sorry, missed a lot of your stuff. Twas a bad time for me in summer of 06.
Anyways, I have found that if you hold onto part of that childhood and keep it as part of you... always... you know, the "inner child"... you'll be okay.
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