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Lost One
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Two stars collided, one day at night
Awakening dreams of old and new,
Both needed each other, to save their plight
And so was born a friendship, as fresh as dew.
Together they spoke of the world
Reminiscing of childhood woes,
And secrets both deep and sacred were told
Protecting each from their foes.
Trust and love became eminent as
The friendship thrived and blossomed,
And a bond such as this
Had never before been begotten.
Too close, some say, the two had got
For something went astray,
And might happiness be still there, had not
One star faded away.
Now the shining star has ceased weeping
Although often, when out comes the sun,
You can still see one tear seeping,
Through her surface, for the pain of her
Lost One.
1993
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LadyDama
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2003-02-10 14:40:00]
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Re: Lost One
(User Rating: 1 )
by Paul on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 07:21:14 PM AEST
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| That really sucks, I'm sorry. Although I believe that if you guys are really meant to be together, it will happen. |
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Re: Lost One
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by karoody on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:15:36 AM AEST
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| so sad...it is a heavy regret when things are left unsaid...hope you get that chance to say them |
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Re: Lost One
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:22:17 AM AEST
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| thank you both, for your comments... now, my dear friend is a UCLA medical graduate... and a doctor!!... we keep in touch... you know, i don't recall if i ever told him, or showed him this poem... maybe i should... i am now married with a beautiful daughter, and a husband who is my Love... but, i still remember the pain of the moment... ... thank you for sharing it with me... |
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