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Thankyou.
Contributed by
ham323
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Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 02:41:59 PM in AEST
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ThankYouPoems
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In my deepest time of need, you were there.
When I was ready to throw in the towel, you were there.
And it seemed like reality was a fallacy, you were there.
I gave in a many times but then I found you, to show how much I care.
You gave me something that is not replaceable, my life.
The loop I was in doomed to repeat to no end, my life.
The shallows I waded for such a sin, my life.
And you were there through it all to see my pain, my strife.
Though times are not easy still, I have you.
And temptation wonders just beyond reach, I have you.
Where people cloud my good judgement, I have you.
Youre wrestling with the beast, a battle I blew.
Somehow you make the decision obvious, youre my answer.
When Im tempted wrong and I feel weak, youre my answer.
I close my eyes wishing I knew just what to say, youre my answer.
When inhaling deep within shameful sins, I see my cancer.
You cured my disease with no intention to run.
One day I hope to repay you, for all that youve done.
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Re: Thankyou.
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by shelby on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 03:31:14 PM AEST
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lovely there is nothing better than to have someone who is there nomatter what. You did a wonderful job through this poem at expressing your feelings of thanks
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Re: Thankyou.
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 03:58:03 PM AEST
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