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She's Just A Girl
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 08:02:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Her hips sway side to side As if a dance was born into her curves, Gracing the eyes of lustful on lookers. Their lips open, spitting out words - Trying to hustle their way into her pants. Baby.
Beautiful.
Sexy.
Shes just a girl.
Him with his egotistical and fresh ways Goes to grab her. His skin slides smoothly over hers and his eyes drift heavily Up and down her body. She shivers.
His grip is strong, but She pulls away and runs.
Shes just a girl.
Her feet pound the pavement, Creating music of innocence Sure to surrender soon. She stops to catch her breath, and the music dies Distastefully on the soiled sidewalk.
A car rolls up along side her and A man about his fifties Calls out to her. His hair is thinning and his skin Is full with creases of lifes hardships. He wants her. Desires her. Is Willing to betray his wife and lie for her.
But Shes just a girl.
She uses words too old for her, Cursing harshly at the man in the car, A man old enough to be her father. And so she begins the music once again. Running towards something enigmatic and destructible.
She tries to steady herself once she reaches the door, Her heart ready to let loose from the barriers that keep it.
She smiles as he opens the door and lets her inside the Lonely house. What does she know, right? Shes just a girl.
His eyes burn into her and his lips taste Of alcohol as they desperately delight in hers. His hands grasp at her body young and new and she feels shes not ready. Shes not ready. She tells him and he scoffs, His words drenched in alcohol dance in her ear If you really loved me you would give it up
Confused she panics and reaches out for him. He smiles and says Thats what I thought.
The room begins to spin as she has to fight her way out Of his hold. Im not ready, she says once more.
He wipes his mouth, Spit glistens on his hand As his words, Rough and solid, Break her heart.
Then get the ***** out.
She gets outside and the music starts for the last time.
Shes just a girl, Forced to be a woman.
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xxbreathlessx
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2006-07-22 20:02:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: She's Just A Girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by kttykttywfreckls on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 03:23:02 PM AEST (User
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a deeply intense poem. And right on the money, becoming a woman is a emotional struggle. |
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Re: She's Just A Girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 10:10:13 PM AEST (User
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Wow, this is incredible. You've told a story, sadly of what it's like for young girls in our society today and how fast they have to grow up. A very well penned write detailing of the experiences young girls are forced to encounter. Well done and keep up the great work.
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: She's Just A Girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by lost-jill on
Tuesday, 19th January 2010 @ 07:12:21 AM AEST (User
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woah that touched me, it is very well written. so sad yet so beautiful. amazingg |
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