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What I Want, Is All I Need
Contributed by
Channing
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Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 11:39:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The world has many offerings
But many arent worth pursuing
And long Ive searched
Looking for something I want
But its much more complex
Than I ever thought it could be
For what I want
Is all within you
When you look into my eyes
I want you to see the truth
And know behind them are no lies
Only my honesty and love
When you feel my touch
I want you to feel my compassion
Much like the blessing of an angel
But mostly what I want
Is for you to see and understand
The true beauty of the world
When you spend your time with me
For you do all this to me
And if I can do the same for you
It would be all I need
From this cruel and chaotic world
Because everything I want
Lies within you
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2006-07-23 11:39:35]
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Re: What I Want, Is All I Need
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 12:27:35 PM AEST
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A truly beautiful declaration of love...
Well done!!
Jenni |
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Re: What I Want, Is All I Need
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 01:14:22 PM AEST
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| I like it, very good....... |
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Re: What I Want, Is All I Need
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by The_Young_Poet on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:17:12 PM AEST
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| ah nice poem. i liked it alot. |
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Re: What I Want, Is All I Need
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 03:58:56 PM AEST
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| Beautiful sentiment, and you're not asking for much, either. Nice post |
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Re: What I Want, Is All I Need
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 08:33:03 PM AEST
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| A passionate write, but lonely longing also. I hope you see that in this write you are asking as i have, for that person to believe you are true and as loving as you want them to percieve you. But i feel that they don't, and that is the reason that that person doesn't deserve to know you, or be with you. Take care, Kimberly |
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Re: What I Want, Is All I Need
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 10:54:21 AM AEST
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| Beautiful xxx |
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