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Shooting Star
Contributed by
Exodus
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Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 09:00:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I tried to write you a letter
I tried to find the things that were right to say
I guess for the first time in my life
I'd rather keep my mouth shut today
Because I have no other reason
The fact that I lost myself and you
I destroyed something that meant something
Even if you don't think its true
I am grateful for the time spent
Even if most of it for you was a waste
Things didn't turn out the way you deserved
But you're young and you've got a pretty face
I'm intrigued by your integrity
I wish I could be there to watch you grow
I just wanted to get out of here
But I never let you know
I miss all the things in the beginning
And am almost grateful for the end
I never meant to break your heart
And would do anything I could to help it mend
I will move to Africa
Or some island that no one even knows
I will sit on the island
And sit and watch as the time goes
I want you to be happy
And am proud to see that you are
I want you to not hate me forever
Just to smile when you see your shooting star
Copyright ©
Exodus
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Re: Shooting Star
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by Solarfyre on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 09:03:42 AM AEST
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| that was touching, thanks for sharing it =) |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by chaos78 on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 09:09:36 AM AEST
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| very beautiful thank u for sharing |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by enamat on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 10:03:43 AM AEST
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| nicely done and really moving |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 10:12:08 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem hope you send its a beautiful letter to.. xxx |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by dougnut on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 10:12:17 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem from the heart with true
emotion shining through,
great work, thanks for sharing it with us.
Hugs from doug. God bless you.
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Re: Shooting Star
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 01:16:54 PM AEST
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| Nice way conclusion in the end. The poem sets off a peaceful aura. |
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