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Path
Contributed by
chaos78
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Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 09:27:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The path that I choose was long and hard
that left me with so many scars and not
just the ones that I put on my arms or the
mark that has stain this heart for the road
was to much to bear wish I never toke it there
I move so many object that lied in my way
I fallen so many times but away pick myself
back up for you were always there someone I
thought who care now the mountains that you
have put in the path are so hard to pass and
each time I make it pass one there another and
Im slowly lose hope that I will never make it
to the end maybe I should just give up again
and let myself fall Im so sick of it all why
should I climb back up just to be push backdown
did I go the wrong way or did I lose my bearing
when will this road become flat or will it put me
dead on my back
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2006-07-24 09:27:46]
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Re: Path
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 10:09:18 AM AEST
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| I know you have to pick your self up again, its so hard but many times I have done it.. Still trying and on the same road..so sad but lovely poem. xxxx |
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Re: Path
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 01:20:20 PM AEST
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| I have felt the same and it gets better just have to keep pushing forward. |
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